this is heartbreaking because it's something that eventually everyone will have to go through. but the thought process 'you never wanted to get old' is something that i'd assume everyone would think. it's so sad but so good.

...so...Riku...lives longer than Axie? aw. you should have had it where like the reader knows that they died at the same time or something!

uh..i really can't imagine Axel and Riku being old... but still, it's sad. heart-breaking. no, Axel! DX don't die just yet!! Riku's waiting!

oh, and this is the first second person pov i've ever read. XD it's good. but i like third person's pov more. XD

normally i dont read depressing fics but wow...this really made my heart ache and my eyes water.

*sniff

oh wow. that made me cry. that dosnt happen. oh wow.

-rika

*silence*
Oh..My..Lanta.
I...have no words to speak.
Speechless.
[I like the rare second person POV. One doesn't see it much in fanfiction.]

Damn depressing stories. THEY'RE EVERYWHERE!! And I can't ignore one this good. You know, only you and Sukunami have ever kept my interest with the boys being older and all that. It usually just does nothing for me and I just click the backspace button. Heh. I almost wish I had. Oh god I'm gonna cry.

Oh man, now i'm crying.

That waas amazing, all your stories are so great.

I bow down to you ^o^

I'm starting to tear up, and I'm in class so yeah. ;~; Oh, Rosa, that was absolutely lovely. I love the POV andandand now I'm going to be sad for the rest of school today.

I adore all your stories so much. &heart;

I teared up. ;__; I think I might've cried if my cousin hadn't been staring at me the whole time I was reading it. xD

BUT ANYWAY. It's so--it's so pretty! I loved it--the POV is a nice touch =D--and the description of the heart attack is wonderfully done and made me want to cry. ;__;

Your oneshots are always wonderful. (:

Wonderful. ♥

You and your freaking stories. Good night woman! It pains me...
As usualy, a job fabulously done. It made me want to throw myself into the story and be a nurse who just happened to be passing the scene so I could help...alas. I can't do that (Yet.) lol. It's odd not checking for an update on Good Enough. lol. I got so used to it. I now go to my favorites and hover my curser of the name before I realize..."wait, that's done." It's going to be my downfall. lol Can't wait to hear more from ya.

Iggy

Aw, that's sad! It is still awesome writing though :) I like how you kept going back to when they were young. Good work!!

wah *cries and hits head on desk* thats no fair >< ... then again its better than a tragic accident T_T it was sweet ^^ you are an awesome writer

Geh. That was rather...disconcerting. I feel distressed. I usually avoid thinking about aging in a negative way, as if admitting the fear of it would make the fear itself real. But, this oneshot seems to suggest that Axel and Riku had similar attitudes about old age and death as I. So Axel's apparent fear at the end is even more unsettling to me, as it rings true. His reaction seemed so entirely plausible, despite how healthy his attitude toward aging and death had been, that it makes me worry about my own final moments. Makes me wonder if my present lofty values and ideas will have any real impact whatsoever on my feelings when I am finally faced with my own end.

...gah. I suppose I've spent more time discussing my own death than actually leaving a review. Sorry about that. But it's your fault for writing things that call for such introspection and reflection! So there! XP

Eep! It was so good! I love you! You write AxelRiku so damn well! It's somewhat ironic how Axel died/almost died (I'm guessing he died, right?) from a heart attack. It's kinda sad, but it's just so riddled with emotion! And it's really amazing. Keep it up!