i love how this story is coming out cant wait until the next chapter

Ok tht was a twist i didn't anticipate. I have been reading this for like i don't know2 hours and then i get her and am about to press the little button for the next chapter when i see tht there is no button. um whats p with tht? why'd you stop? is it writers block, cuz like, i don't mean to nag, but it's been like 5 months and 17 days. so pretty please update. And i love what there is so far.

okay at first i was kinda confused with this story, but now that things are unraveling a bit i cant wait to see wat u have next, so hopefully u update soon...

=)

i can't wait for the next update, this is really good.

This is some good stuff, it'd be even better if you updated.

um, please update this? please? it's very good, and, though unusual, the fantasy aspect doesn't detract from the story in the least. great work!

Kaia

AW WHOA. def awesome that she's still alive, i was really sad that she died, yay! ah i love this story!

Whooa!! What a twist. So as far as I can figure Sara is supposed to destroy whatever was in that chest. And whatever is in that vhest killed the Chiron guy and its next target is the school...or something like that.
Definetly caant wait till the next update

Whoa!
Post more!

oh SNAP! so she's not a ghost. she's alive. well hell, thats even better!! i love sara!!

ok so, she faked her and her sister's death so she could get ready for whatever's about to go down right? and she's a chiron. and the chiron's are going against the townsend's? or.. hmm. i dont even know hahahaha.

but i'm so glad you're back!! i just reread the last chapter yesterday and was like ughh i really miss this story!!

great job. cant wait for more!

And here I thought she was going to say she was a vampire, hahaa. Sweret update. :)

KEEP GOING PLZ

OH HELL NO? Wtf is going on ahahaha. Yeah best story ever, please continue soon.

see that was just an amazing chapter, heartbreaking but amazing nontheless.

aw man, that ending was brutal...