I think you did very well with this! I'd love to see you take the premise you've set up here and elaborate further.

BC

Very cute, and pretty funny. Good ending.

Your grammar was a little iffy though.


Good story though!

cute!

That's funny.

Ahh..
Sorry for the late review for this chappie, I somehow missed it.

Cute cute. Legolas isn't boring. Cute.

Why on earth wouldn't you get more reviews? This story is totally worth reading, it's quite interesting.

Chapter 4 was quite interesting.
"I didn't sneak up. I walked normal." Haha. Darn those sneaky little elves.

Great job, update soon!

Da da da da da! I'm lovin' it...

I like your reason for legolas' behavior!! great story!

Yeah, the messaging service here is screwed up. It's not working properly for me either.

What are they planning? Oh... Very interesting.

What are they planning??

wow! it sounds like an interesting begining of a story!! I can't wait to find out what will happen!!

You've got my attention, aha.

Update soon? Very interesting...

hehe i like lotr. continue plz, sounds good.