really good story

Wow...this was a good chapter!

Oh this was a great proposal.

this is a good story so far

hey, i liked the first version of this chapter! What was wrong about it?! LOL

th ending was the most beatiful thing i have ever read in my life. I cried so hard when I read that.

that was good differemt but good cant wait to read the sequal

i dont think the wolves would have let bella's change go so easily

im liking it so far

I ENJOY YOUR STORY, IT WAS FULL OF DIFERENT MOODS. I HOPE THAT IN A FUTURE I COULD READ ANOTHER STORY LIKE THIS ONE. I LIKE YOUR STYLE!

was a great story. Thanks. something different and original

that is a great story , thanks so much
its a great view on the changing of bella
you have really captured the love triangle
great story
keep on wiritng

Excellent writing!

Absolutely fantastic! Thanks so much for posting this. I realize I'm way late to the game here, but I loved this. :)

YOU ARE INSANE WOMAN.

WTH!

I squealed. Not gonna lie. I almost had one of those attacks that like kills you 'n stuff. Heh.