woah!

It's sort of hard to review this story. It was really well written, interesting, and an unusual plotline, but I have to say it sort of freaked out my idea of Iruka. I don't think I'll ever look (or read) him the same way. :(

damn that was sad...sad adn tough...T__T

very haunting and wonderful story. My heart just twisted as I read it.

This is such a fascinating perspective on the entire world of ninja. It's a heavy read to be sure (you do kill a lot of people lol) but it's so out-of-nowhere original that reading it is a thrill.

Wow. I have no words to express how awesome this story is!

I really enjoyed reading this characterisation of Iruka - it's closer to how I like to view him than how other people see him.

It's also very well written and quite intelligent :)

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Ow. Oow. This hurts, it really does. It's very good, very terrifying, and it hurts me in my heart.

Nice job.

Way depressing. But well written. And twisted. Nice.

I love this story--truly, and utterly.

This fic is absolutely well written. I can't feel sorry for Iruka till the end.

>>As he stares at the names on the memorial stone for hours on end, wondering where the pain is coming from, just two names that really matter-

This is freedom, and he knows it. Why isn't he happy?<<

Hmm... I like it. It has a sort of... bitter quality, somewhat saddening. A new side of Iruka, and personally I'm thankful. ^_^ He always seemed just a little too... nice, haha.

Keep up the excellent work!! :D

This fic is... simply amazingly well written.

Lovely and so deep.

You're a really good writer-I usually hate sad endings but this one was just so good it didn't matter.

I read this and it's really different from your "Things Team 19 Are No Longer Allowed To Do." Why is that?