"I love my dad

even when he hits me

And I love Rafe

even when he's bossy."

Aw. . .that is so cute in a sad/innocent way!

That was really good!

Those are so beautiful...really good, they really reflect on his character.

Wow...just wow. you have talent. i loved those

aw come on cant you add Danny's poem to Evelyn! I soared above the songbirds and never heard them sing I lived my life in winter and then yo brought the spring

Loved it despite absence of flubber. ;) Really, it's amazingly well-written. And On Love (age 10) was so adorable... _*

Awesome!

I love this so much. It's very true to character. Wonderful job! I hope there's more coming.

Those are great!

*sob* that's so touching...that was a great idea, you relly portray Danny's innerself really well. I loved it, do more!

Beautiful, love how you go through the years.

How touching and sweet...what a wonderful idea to write some of Danny's poetry! And they're all in character!

This was wonderful. I can imagine Danny writing these throughout the movie. You capture his character so well! Especially the one on love from the eyes of a ten year old Danny: "I love my dad, even when he hits me. I love Rafe, even though he's bossy." That was so cute, sad, sweet, innocent and funny, that the minute after I read them, I didn't know how to react! Hmm...it seems that Danny had a love interest at the age of sixteen, eh? I always thought that Evelyn was his first girl, judging from the fact he wasn't so smooth with the ladies. But then again, I could be totally wrong. Well I hope you continue this so that we learn more about her!

These are beautiful! Wonderful idea!

Oh my gosh I LOVED it! It was perfect...totally Danny! And you are a really good poet