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| Kate-Lin 2007-03-31 ch 1, anon. | abusecute poem. why don't you right a poem about a beautiful girl with long layered midnight black hair and shocking green (when shes happy) blue (when shes sad)with sparks of gold eyes. btw this chick kicks ** and is by far more powerful then Bante and Vergil put together! ps. she is the daughter of the true (not Mudus) king of hell. basically shes the daughter of the devil- but shes good. she might have been evil in younger days but she is now a bit more wise and also she wants to kill her father who murdered her mother because she wouldn't stay with him- because he had another family out there. |
| MOONLIGHT SHADOW HUNTRESS 2007-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseshort sweet. i really liked the ending. |
| Vir M. 2007-01-06 ch 1, | abuseI rather liked it ^_^ Prose-y poetry rocks my socks! |
| Luna Dagger 2007-01-06 ch 1, | abuseNot bad. The beginning was kinda general. But the ending was quite strong and pulled it all together. Nice work for a little poem ^_^ |