NICE WORK JEN.EVEN THOUGH I JUST READ ALITTLE OF IT. INPRESSIVE. SINCERLY APOLO AKA BRADLY

Great story! I really wanna know the rest of the story... any plans of making chapter 4 ? :O

I can't wait to see the remaining chapters. You are setting up the story quite nicely, and I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
Sincerely,
BOA Destruction
Bill Howell

Hey
great start, I loved this story, Eighteen is great when she's evil :)
Please keep it up and I'll be sure to read...

Great Chapter. I love the evil Eighteen, and I'm sorry for the long wait on chapter 18, but I have been extremely busy with school, and homework. Sorry.
Sincerely
Bill Howell
BOA Destruction

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I loved this chapter. I'm now Giddy to beat hell, and I can't believe I just said Giddy. I don't care though. I really did enjoy the new restart to this chapter, and I can't wait for Chapter 2. You're my HERO!
Sincerely,
Bill Howell
BOA Destruction

Nice start! Update soon:)