I've read hundreds of Fakiru fics but this one gets the prize for being the cutest. I absolutely love it

This is cute, more than a tad weird but still very cute!
Please keep going with this.

I don't really know if birds yawn, but this is a great story! I love it! Plese update! Update! Update!

Ahiru can yawn. I've seen Ahiru make all kinds of expressions a beak shouldn't, and I bet these three little cygn... cyna... swanlings will be just like her in that sense. Egads, this is so incredibly cute and I just want to read moar!

Good gods above writer's block sucks like nobody's business. And this was just so incredibly cute and fluffy! I shall squeal in delite! Ee!

this is adorable! are you writing more?

it's ur story birds can yawn if you want them to

omg the line on the first part, "He was thankful to have her. He didn't want to imagine what it would have been like without her, leaving him as a single father to raise three chicks on his own," was freaking hilarious! Well, I mean come on- it is! Right? *nervous laughter* hehehehe ... I definitely like this. It's very cute ^_^

lol I loved Fakir's reaction to when duck brought the three eggs with her and he got all freaked out and stuff because he thought that they were hers. hahahaha, ^_^

Hi!!

Cute cute. Poor Fakir, with writer's block and three children it must be a torture.

Ahiru being a storyteller its quite intresting and the chicks so expectating jejeje.

If you are planning another drabble, please post it!!

Keep writing!!

Oh my gawd~! This is so wonderful~! Cute, realistic.. and I can really see that happening, aaww this gives me a warm feeling~! sniff you're such a wonderful writer. Write more! Plz? :D

that was soo adorably cute and amusing! :D fakir is soo sweet *nuzzles up to him* hahahah :D

That is the sweetest thing in the entire world.

aww thats really cute. i loved it

That was very, very cute! :)