I liked it - accept where Duo stole Deathscythe for revenge, you are usually so spot on canon I was surprised - I guess it just depends on which translation of Endless Waltz you have seen. Duo in the version I saw stole it because he did not want Deathscythe to be used to murder innocents. Actually Barton's original plan was for the Gundams to be true terrorist tools and kill civilians. It was the scientists and the pilots who chose a different path

Very morbid, in a good way. You make the characters sound so real.

The scene where Duo sees a couple running from the rain, somehow reminded me of the videoclip White Reflection - Two Mix.

I love it! Such a thoughtful story with great characterisation. I really love how they call themselves virgin sacrifices, it's so fitting.

Well done! Excellent introspect and a great examination of the purpose of the Gundam Pilots. I love the characterization, especially Duo's with his somewhat convoluted introduction to this really interesting concept. I really enjoyed reading this, and nodding with a convinced "hmm" every time a valid point was made. You've done a great job with this fanfic!

... Deep. You should go into politics or psychology. This was cool.

Keep up the good work!

Angel

So cool! How do you get them so in-character? It's amazing... And you bring up so many good points that I hadn't really thought about before. Thanks for sharing!

How you've managed to capture them so brilliantly is still baffling me. You have quite the gift. Both in writing and in understanding.

Tempus Mori

Wow. Just Wow.

Interesting conversation. I think, somehow, that Heero talked his way around the initial question, or what I took as Duo's main point.

I love your Duo (and your Duo/Heero interactions) so much that I would kill to read a chapter fic from you with Duo in the lead. Any chance of that ever happening?

Please?

okay, you have to write more gundam wing. i'm loving how you write heero and duo, how you portray their characters and make them THINK, show their emotions and intelligence and humor and wit.

thank you for sharing such talent.

Hmm... I didn't know the boys could be so philosophical. Good job.

Funny yet thought-provoking and brilliantly expressed. I loved it.

This was very good! Please keep up the good work!

oh..wow, I realy liked that, good idea, good discussion, very interessting..when I read the title I thought about just another 1*2 loving-story, but this was much more than that

keep it on :)