Absolutely amazing. Great characterisation and writing, I just wish it was more than a one shot )

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Awesome! I almost died when I read the STella's been shot part, but then I grinned stupidly at my laptop at the morphine part... ) You rock! I also read To Cure A Spirited child, and maybe you should do one of those for these two!

i adore how you write!

how do you do it? lol

very IC! its so good plus mac is with stella so more plus..lol :P

hope i got to read more from you!

-mj(wgf)

Aw, that was wonderful, so sweet *sighs*

I had to admit that I was scared when I read that she had been shot, I was like WTF? she's gonna die? :p

I felt a little bad por Peyton :( but well she can have another guy 'cause Mac is Stella's :lol:

Really enjoyed reading this story. You are a very talented writer and story teller and you wrote about my two favorite characters. Hope to see more from you in the future :)

Oh. Wow. *pauses*. That was AMAZING. You nailed the characterisation - Mac was 100% in character which I think you deserve an award for because personally I find him very hard to write whilst at the same time wanting to write him with Stella. Peyton too reacted exactly as I think she would have even though we have only a small bit of characterisation to work on there.

And then there's your incredible writing style making the whole story vivid and realistic.

This is amazing stuff. Be proud!

Very nicely done. You do a terrific job creating imagery with your writing. The characters are realistically and vividly portrayed and your writing is clean and flows well. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.

That was a great story! It was a very real scenerio and I think you handled Peyton's place in this very well. She has to see what Mac and Stella have even if just in regards to friendship and, I think her accepting that and walking away is something Petyon would do at least if it was for Stella - not so sure about another woman hehehe.

LOVED high Stella hehehe. She is definitely someone who would fight and try to tell everyone she was okay even if she had been shot three times! :)

I'm looking forward to more Mac/Stella from you :D

that was an amazing story!...really great!..I liked the topic of it and the way you wrote the whole story was fantastic!..more to come!;p..great work,loved it

Thank you.

That was absolutely beautiful. Extremely well written with a well paced plot and brilliant characterisation.

And High Stella is a hoot!

Hope to see more from you, Becs x

! wow amazing that was just fab ! your reallt captured their thought's and feelings and i was amazing!

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Havta say that was an awesome in you do more!:)

Very beautiful and well done! Looking forward to more MS from you in the future :)

Oh, wow. Its beautiful. I was a bit apprehensive when I read the name Peyton and then when I read a further, the apprehension went away.

I love it.

WOW, Loved this, painful but hopeful.

I was so worried for a moment I thought he was going to loose Stella like he lost Claire. I think you had every one down so well and the imagery you used with the snow was lovely. I could actualy see this playing out on the show. (I wish)

This was excellent and riveting. I so hope that you will delve into NY fiction and Mac's mind again.