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| star girl(yeah i'm too lazy... 2001-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abusewow this is soo cute. soo like the show! awesome :)!!!!! |
| motorcycle_angel(margaret) 2001-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abusecool are u gonna write more or what? cuz that was good and i like it i hope u continue |
| maegan 2001-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseshort, but cute. i like it. keep up the good work! p.s. i thought characterization was good. |
| a fan 2001-06-30 ch 1, | abuseYou did a great job with this. I wasn't expecting a serious moment but you developed it so naturally. Wonderful romantic ending. I Loved it!. |
| silly27str 2001-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseFunnyy, nice, but write more.... |
| j 2001-06-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseHmmm...i'd bet the sunburn is either based of personal experience, or a shout out to me becuase i am suffering from it. |
| Kim 2001-06-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww...that was cute! A little out of character but nice no less...can we have more?!?!?!?!?! |
| "s.s" 2001-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, that was great, please write more and soon! |
| a reader 2001-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseReally good! Post more soon! |
| Lady Callie 2001-06-27 ch 1, | abuseAwwwwwwww! This is so cute! I love it! It was the perfect pick me up that I needed. Thanks. -LadyCallie |
| *J* 2001-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abusemmm, i like that thing going on between them, its so cute! more please? t/c |
| gekm 2001-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease keep writing this story i really like it:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):) |
| AJQuest 2001-06-27 ch 1, | abusecute |
| NBGirl 2001-06-27 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. |