This story is awesome! I love it!

That was well... wicked! Well done!

i totally cracked up at the end "A figure exploded from the jungle, svelte hellion - worse than any raging polar bear.

A whole other sort of danger.

“Jack?!!”

Oh, hell.

Kate."

so ** hilarious

wow that's all i can say, this is such a good chapter. ana and sawyer and right on character most of the time and just the situation is half funny half smouldering mixed in with pity for ana lucia

wow that was...awesome it was alittle confusing but awesome none the less

"And Sana love.. For Hoelli."
You kidding me? Dude. *blush*

Re-reading now, 'cause I was catching up on it together with the rest of the thread. And 'cause it's awesome.
But seriously *blush*

You're one of the best writers EVER.

"She looked between the three of them, coming to rest beside Jack. Something she was used too. But this; the strange alchemy between Jack and Sawyer, and Ana, - without her - was not." Oh! The world doesn't revolve around you! Or the Island for that matter. Take that, Kate!

"the çaught in a net' pair." Going to have to get somewhat nit-picky here. In the series, Jack told Sawyer about being "caught in a net" when they were loading up the guns to go after the others. After Libby and Ana were dead and buried. So what I need to know is how Sawyer knows about it in this fic, seeing as how no one's been killed and Sawyer still hasn't handed over the weapons?

"someone was gonna die, and soon." **crosses fingers** please let it be kate please let it be kate please let it be kate...

"Lucy had resonated with the darkside as well as the light, he saw that - she was given to temptation either way." Sah-WEET!

What great tension!

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Oh, it was Jack. Of course, Jack to the rescue. Has he been given a white steed and shining armour yet?

"His gaze kept flickering between her and the blond, no doubt taking in their state of undress and the disturbing tension stretched like taffy between them." Well, like duh! He totally interrupted their foreplay!

Ah, Kate. You always screw everything up. You're so dumb, you havne't even managed to kill yourself in one of the many traps you inevitably get caught in. Can't you just get it over with and put us all out of our misery?

Next chapter. Although, I'll be honest, if it has Kate in it, I'm not nearly as excited. Unless she finally does manage to get herself killed! OH! Wouldn't it be great if Jack shot Kate, thinking she was an "Other" coming at them the same way Ana Lucia killed Shannon?! DUDE! That would be AWESOME. Okay, now I'm excited for the next chapter. Wee!

♥ missy42

WOW this is HOT!!

"...her unique scent, stirred his loins..." Hehe! She makes him "weak in the loins." hehehehehe!

"'Done?'she growled at the hustlers never ending brass./Hardly." Hahaha! Well, as far as I can tell, you're spot on with the Ana/Sawyer interaction.

"That’s not all I’ve got for yo’, Rambina." Okay, I know that he's violating her privacy and all, but I am SO jealous of Ana right now. Come to think of it, I'm a bit jealous of Sawyer's view at the moment, too...

"he held out the article of clothing for her to use. His shirt." AW! Is this what you were talking about when you said ooc Sawyer? Because I'd beg to differ. He's the kind of guy who'd oogle a naked woman to get under her skin (not to mention his own satisfaction), but in the end, give into his chivalry, then go back to oogling her just to try and prove that he's not really chivalrous. Very twisted of him, I know, but that's Sawyer for ya!

"Kates and Jacks images wiped out, by the other." WOOT!!

"Now get your stinking hands off her." Is it Jack? It's probably Jack. I'm hoping for Sayid, though. Dude. Hottest. Threesome. EVER. Either way, nice cliffhanger. Onto chapter 3!

♥ missy42

Ana/Sawyer story. Squee!

"So while they were arguing about lill’ Muchacha.s revenge - he had stolen away from the infighting chiefs, to get his hands on her instead." Oo, sounds kinky! Totally lovin' Sawyer's inner thoughts, btw.

"Soapy rivlets flowed down her skin, over tight slick generous curves. As she arched her back, fingers digging in to massage the muscles there, she moved like liquid sin." Awesome couple of sentences, there. **applauds**

Wow. Hot Ana scene! Very interesting the way you write her inner thoughts. Sawyer's too, for that matter. Well, off to the next chapter!

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Well let me tell you one thing, u never cease to amaze me,yet again, u've done another loverly sana, y am I the only one reveiwing? its a great story story people.

uh oh, im so sorry, i sound like a hypocrite me going on about spelling and spelling the word wrong, plz 4give me for the little typo.

Oh my god, that was, wow, amazing, a few speeling mistakes but the story made up for that.