Great fic! It was super creative, but you may want to work on your grammer and your sentance structure.

OMG cute xD. You should write anouther chapter lol. Marluxia got them good xD. I loved it xD. huggles Demyx

Hey I'm glad to see you're writting again. I'm gonna stay away from reading this for now (havn't beat the game yet) but I'm gonna add it to favorites. Keep it up.

This was so good! I loved it! Haha! The Organization doing that to Marluxia and Saix. That is so funny! Haha! I loved the ending! It was so good! Going on my favs right now!