Reviews for Out of this World

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Dragons Quill 2007-10-02 ch 4,	abusewell this is turning out to be an interesting and strange little fic. i am most interested in finding out how or what happens next. please write some more soon! plz.
akila-vilya 2007-03-26 ch 4,	abuseGrargh! It's over! grump grump grump I love the whole style of this fic. The snarky first person comments absolutely make the story. In Ch. 2, when you're talking about the alternate dimension stuff, the reader would throw the story away as being too unrealistic if the narrator wasn't commiserating with them. It's wonderful. One thing isn't 100% clear - She made a decision who-knows-when that created this branch of reality, but what made her jump to this version? When Dumbledore was explaining it, I thought that the decision she made happened at the moment of the jump to the other reality, but obviously, that's not the case. It's not a terribly important detail, it's merely something nagging me about the story. Can't wait for the next chapter! -eliza
Glitz Kelly 2007-03-22 ch 4,	abuseI. Love. YOU! This is amazing. Keep it up.
Amanda Kriska 2007-03-21 ch 4,	abuseThe story is great so far and I can't wait to see what happens next.
SnapesMistress005 2007-03-21 ch 4,	abusevery interesting chappie indeed. have i mentioned how much i'm enjoying your writing style? b/c i really am! it's different. and hermione seems just as sarcastic as severus! it's great! i can't wait to see some more. and relax! we as readers are nothing but patient. enjoy writing!
Forgetful Love 2007-03-21 ch 4,	abuseOMG!! I absolutely love this story. Its so funny, yet in another way it is cute and Serious. Please update soon, I really do love it.
Ekiushi 2007-03-20 ch 4,	abuseVery nice. I would say more, but alas, I must be off to work.
Maddie50 2007-03-20 ch 4,	abuseNow Snape has my sympathy. I know she has to figure out what type of relationship she is in with him, but couldn't she plead memory loss, confusion, something? Hermione is being so shallow about his appearance.
Bookworm.Annie 2007-03-20 ch 4,	abusei like the idea of this fic but for some reason its just not grabbing my attention. im sorry. i will try to keep reading but i dont know how long that will last. i do think your a great writer though. keep going with this story.
Severus-Fan 2007-03-20 ch 4,	abuseWell, I started typing up this review and then I clicked on the button to add a different story to my c2, and BAM! I lost what I'd written. Darn it all! You updated so quickly, it makes me ashamed of myself (and my months of absence). But that's okay. I love Hermione's thoughts and how they're written. And the rant on Christianity seems very, very familiar (I seem to remember reading it in an IM conversation once, lol). I thought this chapter was hilarious, although I'm sad to read that Hermione hates Severus (hopefully she doesn't always feel that way). You should continue updating this fast...for your own good. Glares I mean, updates create happy people, and happy people are good. Nods So for your own good...haha. Blinks innocently Well, I should get going before I do something stupid and end up losing all this again (that's something that'd happen to me, too - I have that type of luck). So I'm going to go, I'll talk to you later (cuz you're not on right now). Byes! Waves
PassingTime 2007-03-20 ch 4,	abuseYey! Another chapter! You know - for some reason Im feeling sorry for Snape - Doesnt he think everythings the way they were before his Hermione got swapped with that Hermione? For a little bit when you said he grinned after she said 'enough of this' I thought for a moment that she wasnt really in another time line at all - but something happened at dinner the first night at Hogwarts when he came up to the head table - like maybe he did something to the people she knew and would ask questions to( or their all in on it - but I think Harry would have turned green and Ron... well would be Ron)... so she would have to develope feelings for him eventualy because she would have to be careful not to 'change' the time line and be 'stuck' I mean he wouldnt go for a potion on her, to change her feelings - that wouldnt be real. But he thought 'learn to love given time' as his inspiration... Hahahahahaha sorry - see what putting in one little grin can do to my head? Great update! Im so glad you didnt make Hermione go all mushy after one little itty bitty kiss -_- Too many people write that in. Loved the nose commentry nods Cant wait for the next update. Have a good week! ~PassingTime~ ( previously called CinnamonMonty!)
SnapesMistress005 2007-03-19 ch 3,	abuseok u were right, a few things have been cleared up. hm, can't wait to see the interaction b/t herm and sev. should be interesting! and how the heck did she get there?! more more now!
Severus-Fan 2007-03-17 ch 3,	abuseI'm not sure how I saved your stories, but I suppose you'd know if I did or not. Nods Hahaha, I love you added "Wrddle!" at the end of it. That just made my day. I had no chance - I burst in to laughter, and now my parents think there's something wrong with me (well, they did before, but now they think it's more obvious. Or something. I dunno.). I loved your bit right below about the Marriage Law Challenge. There's no law and they're not married, but it's just like a response to it! I'm still amazed at your ability to carry on so many stories at one time. I've got two going, and I still haven't updated either of them (despite promise that I would do so). Wait! This is about your story, not mine. So sorry! I'm rambling. Something about leaving reviews (especially reviews for you) make me go all "Wop!" What a disturbing commercial that's on television. Freaky...right, right, focussing (one "s"? Two? Hmm...). I really am looking forward to seeing where this is going (as I am for all your other stories as well). You have a great way of having the character's stay In Character, but make the situations seem believable (as believable as Fanfiction can be, anyway). Not to mention the humor! I think humor is one of the hardest types of stories to write, but you do it so well. I'm constantly in awe of your talent, and one day I want to be as good a writer as you are (and no, I'm not trying to flatter you for a faster update, although maybe I should...hmm...). Well, I'm going to go now. Anime and reading fanfiction is calling my name - Melisa!! - and I have to obey the call! nods Yes... Please, update SOMETHING soon!! Begs shamelessly
Maddie50 2007-03-16 ch 3,	abuseWell there certainly is positive reinforcement to stay instead of go. I would rather be snogged and loved than verbally abused or ignored and hated.
jayne.doe 2007-03-16 ch 3,	abusedude, legend. i like this. and i particularly like that last comment about the marriage law fic, but how its not... classic. great story. can't wait to see them dating... is she going to explain it to him? or would that be chnging the course of the path? anywho, great story.

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