 Got Scots 1/10/07 . chapter 1Aww, this is really cute! I love this song by Snow Patrol and I hadn't thought of it before, but it fits perfectly with their story. I really thought it was cool how you had Pen meet someone who she thought was Des. It seemed like something that would really happen. The only part I thought was a bit awkward was when Penny and Des were reunited. Des seemed kind of out of character when he just started spilling all the stuff that happened-but who knows. He's allowed to be out of character because he's shocked I guess. Anyways, this story is really cute! Sorry about the longest review in the world. |