Really good story. Oh yea and ashes mom's name is Delia.

I'm confused with the ending. How could it be Nurse Joy that tells Aoshi Ketchem about his grandchild. Shouldn't it be that Ash's mom is the one that says all that stuff about Destiny? Anyway, good job.

The first chapter was great but then on the second chapter you lost all of your overall it was a fantastic Done!

Okay, a side note to those who don't know the aging stuffs: A&M are about 16/17 in this fic. How do I know this? *Hides under evil silver and black, eyes peek out and glitter evilly* I'm the author's SISTER! I was the one who assisted her when she was having writer's block! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! It'S PARTLY MY DOING! *Sees all the people who hated the story coming running after her with torches, pitchforks, and large hunks of heavy, sharp rocks* Oops... *Hides, continues rant* Anyway, yeah, I like this story _ HEE HEE HEE Bai bai everyone!

Aww! That's a great story! At first I would have NEVER expected it to turn into this type of fic. Very deep and touching stuff. The only problem I had was the way the murder was solved. I thought that Tony just leaking it out like that was just a little too unbelievable. I had thought that maybe they'd catch him trying to to kill Ash again or something. But a wonderful story nonetheless.

Sweet!

AHHH! Evil parents from Mars! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES! AHHHHHH! *pauses* Okay, I'm done. Sorry for being hyper back there. But why would they want to interfere? I mean, okay, so Misty's pregnant and all, but they're already married! And there's nothing they can do about it unless Misty/Ash wants a divorce. Okay, sorry again for the ranting, but I needed to get it out of my system. Write the next chapter soon, PWEASE? PWETTY PWEASE? *looks at LeaMarie with puppy dog eyes* Lira

it's a good story, really cool and everything... but what 98 degrees song is it based on?

Oh goody I was so afraid that Ash was going to get killed! *dodges psybeam* uh I'm in the middle of a battle here with a certain AngryMew2! *shoots own psychic which hits AngryMew2 in the face* Hahahhaha Iiiii got you! Oof! *hit with AngryMew2's protective bubble and makes one of its own* Alright bubble time gotta go! Buh Bye!

Why did Nurse Joy said she loved him is she just emotional or did something... AHHH BAD GIRL BAD! ok well hehheheh uhh...bye

I loved the story but just one thing, why did nurse Joy said "I love you" when she was 'talking' to Ash's dad's grave?

uh...whatever

Awesome story! Two problems though. One - title. Two - why a Golem? He's one of my favorites! why not a Golduck or Rhydon?

It took you this long to finish 1 fanfic?

UM, GREAT FIC, BUT AT THE END, IT IS"WHY ARE MISTY'S PARENTS", NOT "WHY IS MISTY'S PARENTS"