Definitely update soon please, it's been a while.

Great story! When will Malon figure out who Link is? Update soon!

Dirt Rider

THIS IS AMAZING i love this stroy so much. i hope the next chapeter comes soon!


Thank you for writing it!

Please! I beg of you! Write more! I can't stand waiting! D=

Well the story's preety good keep writing!

All I can say is wow. Its been a while since I've read such a well put together piece, and never on a fanfic site. T'm impressed at how you managed to link Ocarina of Time and Twilight Princess in such a great way. This is awesome!

Ironic that you updated the day I read it and left it for dead. Good thing I finally checked my e-mail.
Poor Malon. How is she going to survive now? And how is Link going to defeat the twilight without Midna and burdened by Malon?
I'll be seein' ya laters, to get some answers. xP

now my stone heart is broken. Dust in the wind. ps midna inter stage leaft really it is a good idea.or Ruto yes weard lovibel Ruto or both:).

You too hu Nead help Chapter uno Good dude 2 vs Eval Dude's boss please help

Why flame? This story is out of flames reach, trust me. anybody who's flaming you don't know what he/she's doing. I love the fact that you mix between OoT and TP, it's a relief sometimes, cause the concept of OoT is very nagging now a day. I mean everyone have at least one time wrote about it, the only differences is usually the parings. Link's feelings are pretty much the same. It feels like you read the same thing over and over again (not that I'm saying that any of them are bad.) But you're ending it right when it's starting -- if you know what I mean, and start with a totally new story. And I have to say that I love the idea!

To be honest with you I have now tips to give you. You're an awesome writer and I hope you'll continue this story (since I love it really much.)

Oh and maybe I should add that I don't read so much uncompleted fanfiction since it's so disappointing when you find a really good story and after six chapters or something the author just disappear never to update again, (not that it's his or her fault things might have happened or just lack of ideas or something I don't judge that!) But is just sad you know? But it so happens that I find a intriguing story and that is just what this is and I felt obligated to inform you of that!

Just keep up with what your doing and you will do fine! If not more.

-- J.S.N who was to lazy to log in, sorry bout that!

Sometimes you seem to tell the story instead of showing. When you show the story...it's amazing. I feel as if i'm in the story itself.

One small thing at the beginning of the chapter, where you used the word Impassive. Impassive literally means "without emotion." That's a powerful word to use, but not when combined with a retort comment.

You have a great story going, keep at it!

Lovely to see an update. Great!

*squee!*

You updated! Thank the Goddesses! ;)

Fantastic update, I love the flashbacks/dreams that accompany each chapter. They make me want to go play Ocarina of Time, lol! My heart was racing during that last battle, and I think I died a little seeing that she lost the ranch!

Definitely can't wait to till the next chapter! I want to see where she'll have to go after this!

thank you for continuing!

Wow, this was a fantastic read, I'm sad to see it seems to be abandoned...