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imagineaworld
2009-12-06 . chapter 2
This is really good. I hope you write some more soon...
As for the 'porn ban' I know of several authors (including myself) who write it M, and write 'adult content,' 'bdsm,'
'explicit content' etc and some have been posted for years and never got caught, so dont worry about it...
fgxhjn!!!!
2009-11-02 . chapter 2
UPDATE SOON PEASe! =O
DreamSofDementiA
2009-09-30 . chapter 2
OhMaiLawd.
I don't say this often, but... UPDATE THE HELL OUTTA THIS STORY!! ^_^ Tehe.
Anyway.. I'll be a good Nei-chan. XD
Pretty please with sugar..? Excellent story. ^_^
~Nei-chan. Xx
TylendelxVanyel
2009-06-06 . chapter 2
I need more of this! this is probably one of the best stories (like this) i have read in a very very long time! Don't stop this story, i beg of you!
BloodyRoseSharpThorn
2009-01-19 . chapter 1
Please update soon. :(
Ishtar205
2008-10-27 . chapter 2
Will you continue this fic ? Because I love it and I want to know what's coming next !
candycloud44
2008-08-25 . chapter 2
very nice.
isrocks
2008-08-21 . chapter 1
** *drools *
waitsiriusly411
2008-06-23 . chapter 2
I know it's been over a year, and that there's probably zero chance of an update, but I figure I'll ask anyway. You've got a good start, and I'm interested to know your theories on why Sasuke would be submissive (personally, I think he makes the perfect uke for Kakashi). You write said theories into very interesting chapters, and I can't deny that I'm definitely looking forward to exploring more into Sasuke's fantasies.
blisblop
2008-06-23 . chapter 2
Gwd! Elite stuff.I am almost scared to see where this will go.You are very talented.
MochaCocaFan
2008-06-09 . chapter 2
Interesting, very deep and explanatory. Is there going to be more chapters?
zeilya
2008-05-24 . chapter 1
(lazy to log in)
I've found an explanation. I'm addicted to the neurotransmissors this story provides me with. And so that's the reason why I keep reading it again. It's so damn hot. I mean, if you wrote a book about this, I would buy it. Seriously.
You should read Anne Rice's porn, it's written under the nickname A.N. Roquelaure. There's a game in wich two males have to fight to rape the other... (of course they both love it) well, and many other things as well.
Emma Stargaze
2008-05-07 . chapter 2
Excellent story so far! And, if your story is truly deleted or something... make sure to have a backup, of course, so you can do the following:

repost it without the lemon/smut/whatev, and get an account on mediaminer or something and give a link to it on fanfiction. That way people are brought to your stories on FFNet and can read the lemon without you being in trouble.

Sorry for the long explanation...
Alex
2008-04-15 . chapter 2
I love it!! Great job, keep going!!
dottylotty
2008-04-03 . chapter 2
wow, i love the feel of this fic, how you describe Sasuke's need to be dominated. i love it and i can't wait for the next chapter
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