Beautiful.

I really like it! I think your poetry is great. Please consider doing more Les Miz poems!

It was beautiful! Not boring at all,I loved the way it was going. Very haunting and melancholy.

No, that was fantastic! Good job! love this pairing!

A great poem fic. Very well written.

As a story, this is awesome. I love Javert/Fantine fics, and this must be the one time Javert is at a loss for words. But as a poem, there are a few flaws. Though the rhymes match up, the syllables don't always. Still, I'm giving it a thumbs-up. :)

That's so beautiful! I'm totally serious. I'm always really excited to see a non-cheesy rhyming poem, and this made my evening. .

Aw...this made me go all warm inside. For some odd reason I've always had a tiny inclination towards Javert/Fantine...I don't know why. And your rhyming was great! At least it wasn't free-verse, as is an all-too-common feature on this site. Brava. *applauds*

AHI LOVE IT! perfect! ive been dyeing to so some javert/fantine's and here is an excellent one! pltz write more!

aw that is so adorable!

I think it was well written but I didn't quite understand it.

I have no idea why you're worried about your poem being not good enough. I've see some pretty crappy poems and this one does NOT fit in that category. Your rhymes are nice. I find people tend to use really obvious rhymes that get annoying. You've done a good job to keep rhyming without it being too obvious. A common mistake for writers is that they preserve the rhyme but lose the rhythm Your rhythm is mostly consistant but there are a few spots where the syllable count is a bit off.

You should post more poems 'cause this one is good.

Javert seemed a little OOC but it could just be me.(Now that's a horrible rhyme.) I never thought he was the kind to be struck speechless by someone he arrests.

*grins* I'm a sucker for Javert/Fantine stuff, but I thought this was pretty well written. Just cuz you're writing isn't Skakespeare doesn't mean it's not good enough. Sometimes simpler is better. It's like what Mr. Keating says in "Dead Poets' Society": "Just don't make it ordinary." Lots of kudos to you.

xmfan