Keep up the good work!! cute story :D

Sweet, i got to read after suspicions... I read from chapter one to eight in the site... This is good. Keep it up and update soon!

Erm, did you know that your story is also in That's why the title and the summary really caught my eye...

Hey this is good... I love it!

OMG! I love the story so far! :D Keep posting!

oh..that was so sweet..their conversation was great in the end and in the right amount of romance.

FANTASTIC!i really enjoyed the last chap.I'm glad it didn't end up like"we can't be together" and that stuff. Please continue writing about them!

Aww thanks Selbie ^_^ it's really nice of you to tell that ** off ^_^

Those people need to get a life, I mean seriously...Why would they read my story in the first place if they think it's **...

By the way, Thefallendumbass, you reviewed on my first chapter, saying "this is pure **". How is it "not leaving readers wanting more" if you're on the first chapter and nothing even happens? You really are a **...

Oh wow you are the biggest hypocrite I've ever seen. You're the one going "your story is **" and "you write turd" well don't comment if you have nothing good to say, **. I'm not 10 years old because then I wouldn't be able to write this much and in correct grammar too -_-

You're really stupid, and you don't know ** about other people so please shut up before you get shot in real life, mmkay?

Aww that's such a cute chapter! I love her conversation with Fran, and like Sita-Silver Breeze say, she isn't really clingy to Balthier like the other fics ;)

The part where he bought her the necklace is cute too. I loved the ending where you talked about Ashe's dream ^_^

I've been reading your reviews, and apparently I saw the "pure **" thing by "thefallen9-9-9". Kids these days, so rude and cruel...Don't worry though, everyone else like your story except for that fallen kid and "califlowa" or whatever. Look, I bet they're the same person, so don't worry, okay? ^_^

Yes, you're so mature, "oh ur story is **, its turd." Hey it's called giving reason, **. I don't ** care if you think my story is **, because flaming with no reason (logical and mature reason, that is) just tells me that you have no life and just make fun of other people to compensate for your loser-ness. That is true for most people who made fun of other people, too, so don't say **.

By the way, if my story is "**", why do you even read it? And if you do, why do you even bother to leave a ** comment like that? Huh? You need to go outside instead of staying on the computer looking at ** all day, **!

I know I'm mad when people talk ** to me, so I hope your **-** self understand that. And if you want to talk smack back to me, at least send a message...-_-

I'm not gonna say anything more, since you should probably go get counseling on how to treat other people right before they treat you right. By the way, do you even have any friends at school? Because judging from your review, I don't think you do...

owie this chapter is so sweet xD xD Please update soon :D

Squee! The ending to this chapter was so cute! I guess this is as close to a lemon as I'm gonna get, huh? ;)

I noticed a lot of grammatical mistakes this chappie, tho. Which is something you don't do a lot. Thats okay, tho, we all make them. I make them a lot. ;)

Great chapter. I loved Fran and Ashe's conversation... and how Fran would be okay without him by her side. You made her seem so independent, and I loved it. Most fictions make Fran so clingy to Balthier. Great work.

To Thefallen9: *click* *click* *BANG!*

To califlowa: yeah umm reasons would be nice, thanks. and also if you are the same person as Thefallen9, then you have no life.

Wow, wonderful chappie, loved how it was AshexBalthier centric and how their night ended. Hopefully Balthier won't be through with Ashe afterwards though...that wouldn't be nice at all. XD

-DarkShine07