Share/Save/Bookmark
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: The Last Mistake You'll Ever Make - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

No one specific
2008-08-01
ch 1,
abuseAh... the ancient mystery of where all our tax money goes – solved

Wonder if that translates to our world, too? Probably...
Sakurabound
2008-02-03
ch 1,
abuseWow, you write wonderfully. I cannot wait for the next chapter. I hope that you update soon.

Abbz
The One Called Demetra
2007-12-25
ch 1,
abusek, I have NO CLUE what possesed you to write this trash! Nasteh!
Julian-Mur
2007-06-07
ch 1,
abuseIt's my favorite paring! Unfortunatly, I didn't saw such fan-fics more... Please, write more, it's really amazing... And I love your style.
Syndromia
2007-06-05
ch 1,
abuseFirst off, you're right, Durza is damn sexy, too bad he died in the book, and that he was butchered in the movie... Second, Durza/Murtagh is second in sexiness to Durza/Eragon. Third, this is remarkably well written, my only complaint is that you haven't updated in almost five months, what happened? Writer's block? Please update, pretty please?

God Bless,
Syndromia
Elenna Starlight
2007-03-10
ch 1,
abuseHey, I really like this story. Durza/Murtagh is a little bit special, but this doesn't mean it's bad. In fact I enjoyed reading it and hope you'll update soon!

Note: I'm Swiss so please forgive my mistakes.
Xtina
2007-02-20
ch 1, anon.
abusethis is really good u should keep writing
Jeezabel
2007-02-15
ch 1,
abuseI love it update soon
Lady Tourniquet
2007-02-10
ch 1,
abuseum, its good, but M/D?! Im sorry, Durza may be a tad iffie at times but come on man, Murtaghs too hot to be gay! Still, its very interesting. :)
blackrose305
2007-02-01
ch 1,
abusebring it on!and hell yeah durza is sexy!
Rock Not War
2007-01-21
ch 1,
abuseMurtagh/Durza? I must say I was worried when I read the summary, but after reading the first chapter I'm not really anymore.

You write very well and Murtagh's characterisation was really good. I loved his sarcasm.

Excellent job!
The Philosopher's Queen
2007-01-11
ch 1,
abuseooh. this is good, i like that Murtagh's already very mature for thirteen. (Except for the bouncing on the bed bit ;) lol) hope you update soon
Disintegrating Vortex
2007-01-10
ch 1,
abuseWhoah... Murtagh's 13? That's... young. *nods appreciably* I like where this is going, can't wait for more! :3
PS: Don't bother to read Eldest... it gets all screwy with A CERTAIN CHARACTER...
Contra Mundi
2007-01-09
ch 1,
abuseHmm. It's a little hard for me to say since you haven't read the books and I haven't watched the movie. XD

I like your Murtagh. He's sweet in the stupidlittlesnottybrat,someonegetmeaswordsoIcanspear'im sort of way. LOL

I agree very much with guillotine.exe. It's a very interesting (and amusing) idea that Durza would ever be a Peeping Tom. Get Murtagh to blow pepper in his eye next time. Apparently that's what they did in Elizabethan England. XD

I don't see how this can be Horror, unless you meant that some people might not take to this pairing and might find it Extremely Scary and Horrifying. But other than that... Still, it's only the first chapter. Too early to say, ne?
Embry
2007-01-08
ch 1,
abuseO...this sounds like its unna be really good! i can;t wait to read the next chapter!
Return to Top