 Romantic J e s t e r 2008-09-28 . chapter 5ohh, reading this series put me in a writing mood. too bad i do all my writing at my mom's house. well, it was the highlight of my day.
if i ever need a banelo fix you'll be the first i look too, dear skylark.
good luck in all your writing! |
 Romantic J e s t e r 2008-09-28 . chapter 4this one is my favorite, by far! skylark, you have a talent of writing that puts you right up there with Catalina (the best writer i've ever come across).
banelo fans are so lucky to have you! |
 Romantic J e s t e r 2008-09-28 . chapter 3now i remember! i read all these oneshots when i didn't have an account. i'm sorry i didn't try reviewing annoynomously (i didn't exactly know how it felt to receive more hits than reviews).
anyways, the ways of pirating seem to have rubbed off on penny. as always, you did a great job with their character and plot. |
 Romantic J e s t e r 2008-09-28 . chapter 2since each oneshot are separate works, i'm reviewing all of 'em!
when i read your stuff i'm constantly finding myself 'awwing' and 'ohhing'
i your writing style, and the originality of each fic! |
 Romantic J e s t e r 2008-09-28 . chapter 1Ohh, this was sweet and funny. What with the in character dialouge, it was easy to imagine everything. |
 Neko-Yuff16 2008-09-23 . chapter 5ok. credit needs to be given to you, my dear. i believe ive read a couple of your stories now (and plan to read more) about Balthier/Penelo, and im still getting the happy heart swelling. bravo, my dear, bravo!! keep up the good work. |
 somepersonxP 2008-01-31 . chapter 2WOW! I thought what she wanted Balthier all along. Love the parallels between the Onion Knight [best class in FF I!] and everyone's favorite sky pirate. Awesome job! |
 Katreda 2008-01-07 . chapter 2Wah! Penelo and Balthier! Each chapter is so good that it should be turned into a longer story -_- |
 Sky-Pirate325 2008-01-03 . chapter 5I love these little one-shots. They're so sweet and warm and fuzzy >,<
And I really like Penelo with Balthier, rather then all of the balthier/ashe and balthier/fran pairings.
Nice work!
Hope you write some more soon! |
 LadyJamie178 2008-01-02 . chapter 5Awesome Chapter!Write more soon. |
 squishumms 2007-12-29 . chapter 5This update is one of the highlights of my year! ^^!
I can see where you're using this for practice, but even so I really like it. I love the chemistry you peel out of them - something more fiesty than the naive and the experienced.
It's great to see you back, there is such a lack of Banelo love out there. |
 Priestess of Groove 2007-12-28 . chapter 5I have really enjoyed your short stories for some time. They're so creative and still true to the characters. Please continue when you can. =)
~PoG |
 The Blearing Phoenix 2007-05-19 . chapter 4Great to see you back again.
It seems as if Balthier here is afraid of losing himself to Penelo's addictive persona. Yeah, maybe I'm right. But there's something deeper to this than meets the eye.
Lovely work, I love how you used "fright" as a theme for this, it fits rather well with the scenarios you wrote it around.
- TBP |
 RETURN OF THE GREAT MOCHILOCH 2007-04-07 . chapter 4 MORE! These are so charming! I loved Balthier before but I ABSOLUTELY ADORE him now :-D |
 LadyJamie178 2007-04-05 . chapter 4I love it! |