It was soo sweet lol

Cute!

hmm... Sweet, Cute, Funny fic... I would write a sequel if I were you

It was great

Dude! I loved it so much I cried(sobs). But put in a Davis/Yolei or a Izzy/Yolei. Thank You and Good Night!

Hey I loved it! It is so cute!

Marshmellows are good. That's the only reason to accept flames. But bug repelent doesn't taste good. It makes fire big though. Hehehe. Don't mind me; I'm a pyro. (Sees men in white jackets) Coming! (Skips after them) By the way, I LOVED that story. It was soooo amazingly sweet. I'm gonna read more of your stories when I'm released. Bye! *Sugar is good*

Amazing. Extraordinary. You did great Artemis! One thing, i think TK and Kari would've known it was each other in that tunnel. And their fight was a tad under-done. But it was a very nice work. Here's the critic, signing off.

This isn't a flame, or a comment. IT'S A COTTON CANDY! Bouncy, bouncy, bouncy...

Yay it's me again! I love your fanfics. (suddenly gets dull look on face) Wait a minute I sound like some stupid girl! (No offense to the ladies out there) Any way I really like those takari stories a lot. I'll try to review as many as possible!

good ficcy! *gets eaten by T.K.*

heeeheee kawaiiness! I really liked your fic :)

That was GREAT! GO TAKARI!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW so cute! *sobs* I love you Takeru! (sorry Izzy! Takeru's only second to you, though. me luvs you Izzy!)

if your not planning 2 write a sequel, u should _