 NarutoRocks21113043 2008-10-11 . chapter 1You are a genius author, this fict was not only enchanting, but joyous, inlighting, and overall refreshing. |
 Cloud Ex-SOLDIER 2008-05-02 . chapter 7Man, I love this story.
Your description is truly your story's strong point. The level of detail and depth you placed into each chapter made your story quite simply one of the best i've read. The dialogue was fun and believable. I liked how you showed how Sakura fell in love with our favorite blonde ninja, showing where her feelings left Sasuke and how they blossomed into something more with Naruto. Another good touch was showing Sakura's mother's devotion to her daughter and her changing opinion for Naruto. Her comment to the council was cool as well.
Needless to say, I loved Naruto's response to the council. It would've been cool to see the other parents' reactions and thoughts but alas it was a good chapter nonetheless.
I was a bit surprised Naruto did not smell the scent of the unborn child in Sakura when they went to the elders meeting but then again he was not at ease.
Great story, one of my favorites. ;) |
 wind797 2008-04-23 . chapter 2“Wow its pink to…” that was one of the funniest narusaku momments I have ever seen i can't believe Sakrua didn't kill Naruto for that true humor there |
 animefan28 2008-04-02 . chapter 7yay I love happy endings! I always read the end of a story first to make sure its not too sad or depressing! haha im just a sucker for happy endings! lol nice story! |
 FamousFox89 aka the black Crow 2008-03-12 . chapter 1LOVE IT! |
 noname00 2007-12-31 . chapter 1nice fic so far^^ |
 Ower 2007-12-21 . chapter 7Loved this work, it was great. All the, Narutos reaction after learning about Anokos life, and after he was given the choice, his dream or his family were clear for me, but stil warmed my heart when reading them. |
 DaColombianSmurf 2007-12-19 . chapter 7awesome story...will there be a sequel?^^ |
 tastemyfandom 2007-12-18 . chapter 7Good job, I really enjoyed this story! =]
[btw, it's 'Tenten' not Ten Ten. Just saying.] |
 MiKe2vIcIoUs 2007-12-18 . chapter 7Very cool, I'm glad Naruto ended up becoming Hokage in the end. I loved this story, and I'm glad to see it end with such a happy scene.
Thanks for the great story! |
 Miss Soupy 2007-12-18 . chapter 7aww you are quite welcome :) it was a lot of fun! I'm glad i could help a little. I love the ending, its so cute and warm and fuzzy. Naruto would be a great dad, i have no doubt, and an amazing Hokage.
Yay for happy endings! |
 Miss Soupy 2007-12-18 . chapter 6ahh Derek-kun, you had me worried for awhile there! I really did hate those old grumps XD But it just further proves that Naruto can over come any challenge and his heart is always in the right place.
ps I bet Kakashi would make a sexy hokage X3 |
 Gnosismaster 2007-12-18 . chapter 7Great chapter. I love it.
Who's Anoko again? |
 Bahamut Slayer 2007-12-18 . chapter 7Here I thought you were done with it. Great ending. With everything that's all sad in Naruto right now, a nice ending is really good. I mean between Dan/Tsunade, Asuma/Kurenai, the all too late Jiraiya/Tsunade so far... you get it. Anyways, thank you. Just happy there's still some well written Naruto/Sakura fics in here. Looking forward to that.
*I got confused at first, the part where Tsunade said, "Jiraiya, your father, and your mother would be proud."
I was like...'what? what does jiraiya's parents hae to do with this? Then again, og...now I get it. lol |
 UzUmaki Rage 2007-12-18 . chapter 7great story...hope to read more of your works soon... |