 Lapse in Judgment 2/22/07 . chapter 5but, but, this story was so good! i couldn't wait to see what happened next! please, please,please, start updating again! |
 megoingincognito 2/21/07 . chapter 5-explodes- NOO! I need to know what happens to Chloe! I have you on every alert possible! Suspense kills me :(( but its ok, I'm having writers block on my current story, I know how it feels. Cant wait to see something up again! |
 Duffster21 2/17/07 . chapter 5i like it |
 chloe-and-clark 1/30/07 . chapter 4i love this story, cant wait for more ] |
 megoingincognito 1/25/07 . chapter 4That was REALLY good. Everyone was in character... I couldnt stop reading, and I nearly died when my internet died when it was loading the 3rd chapter. PLEASE WRIGHT MORE! |
 FerretGirl333 1/20/07 . chapter 1This all looks pretty good so far... just a couple of things with grammar and spelling... e.g. "That's not the only information..." should be "That WAS not the only...".
This is a common mistake with spelling - I'm guilty of it too :P The word "peaked" means to reach the top of something. The word you are looking for in this case is "peeked". Happens to everyone, but I must admit that the peak/peek one is the one that annoys me the most. So I make a point of telling everyone when I see it... sorry:)
Now I'm going to read the next chapters!
Thanks for reading. |
 sayrae3times 1/19/07 . chapter 4I'm sorry it took me so long to review. Been super busy! In fact, I totally missed the last chapter so when I came in tonight I was like, Huh? Anyway, fabulous 2 chapters! I like the memory Clark had of Chloe in the last chapter and in this one I especially like the comment Lex made about nobody knocking. That is so very true! You never ever see ANYONE knock. |
 justawritier 1/19/07 . chapter 4great update soon :) |
 Shannonn14 1/19/07 . chapter 4LOL i love this story continue asap |
 whobringsforththewind 1/19/07 . chapter 4:( :( :( That was so sad! Especially cause it reminds me of Evan...:( :( I feel so bad for everyone, and I don't like Lex! He always has an angle! Please UPDATE SOON! |
 DarkDefender89 1/17/07 . chapter 3update soon |
 Lapse in Judgment 1/14/07 . chapter 3that chapter was excellent! when are you putting up the next one? i hope it's soon! |
 Shannonn14 1/12/07 . chapter 3great cliff hanger! NOO CHLOE |
 whobringsforththewind 1/12/07 . chapter 3Hey! An awesome cliffhanger! :) :) She has to be healed though...she can't be paralyzed! :( :( I feel so bad for everyone! I can't wait till we get back and you can update! :) |
 sayrae3times 1/10/07 . chapter 2Excellent work, especially with Clark's emotions. Can't wait for the next chapter. Oh-and have fun in Tennessee! |