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Lapse in Judgment 2/22/07 . chapter 5
but, but, this story was so good! i couldn't wait to see what happened next! please, please,please, start updating again!
megoingincognito 2/21/07 . chapter 5
-explodes- NOO! I need to know what happens to Chloe! I have you on every alert possible! Suspense kills me :(( but its ok, I'm having writers block on my current story, I know how it feels. Cant wait to see something up again!
Duffster21 2/17/07 . chapter 5
i like it
chloe-and-clark 1/30/07 . chapter 4
i love this story, cant wait for more ]
megoingincognito 1/25/07 . chapter 4
That was REALLY good. Everyone was in character... I couldnt stop reading, and I nearly died when my internet died when it was loading the 3rd chapter. PLEASE WRIGHT MORE!
FerretGirl333 1/20/07 . chapter 1
This all looks pretty good so far... just a couple of things with grammar and spelling... e.g. "That's not the only information..." should be "That WAS not the only...".

This is a common mistake with spelling - I'm guilty of it too :P The word "peaked" means to reach the top of something. The word you are looking for in this case is "peeked". Happens to everyone, but I must admit that the peak/peek one is the one that annoys me the most. So I make a point of telling everyone when I see it... sorry:)

Now I'm going to read the next chapters!

Thanks for reading.
sayrae3times 1/19/07 . chapter 4
I'm sorry it took me so long to review. Been super busy! In fact, I totally missed the last chapter so when I came in tonight I was like, Huh? Anyway, fabulous 2 chapters! I like the memory Clark had of Chloe in the last chapter and in this one I especially like the comment Lex made about nobody knocking. That is so very true! You never ever see ANYONE knock.
justawritier 1/19/07 . chapter 4
great update soon :)
Shannonn14 1/19/07 . chapter 4
LOL i love this story continue asap
whobringsforththewind 1/19/07 . chapter 4
:( :( :( That was so sad! Especially cause it reminds me of Evan...:( :( I feel so bad for everyone, and I don't like Lex! He always has an angle! Please UPDATE SOON!
DarkDefender89 1/17/07 . chapter 3
update soon
Lapse in Judgment 1/14/07 . chapter 3
that chapter was excellent! when are you putting up the next one? i hope it's soon!
Shannonn14 1/12/07 . chapter 3
great cliff hanger! NOO CHLOE
whobringsforththewind 1/12/07 . chapter 3
Hey! An awesome cliffhanger! :) :) She has to be healed though...she can't be paralyzed! :( :( I feel so bad for everyone! I can't wait till we get back and you can update! :)
sayrae3times 1/10/07 . chapter 2
Excellent work, especially with Clark's emotions. Can't wait for the next chapter. Oh-and have fun in Tennessee!
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