That was sad. but the story was awesome. KUDOS!

This is completely mind-numbing. Seriously. And so very realistic. Amazing job...

That was... Powerful. It was completely amazing, it was just... wow. Excellent work.

Kipcha

i love you stories!

Wow... So amazing. I loved the format, and how you made the beginning very foggy so you didn't really know what happened but made you read on wanting to know what happened... Just so awesome xD! Although, the last two words made me chuckle due to it's bluntness and randomness... ^^ Awesome though!~

so you do realize that if you ever came out with a book of your own, i would def be the first one on line to buy? ive already read your other works and you never fail to surprise me with wonderful stories. ive already said that i dont really read angst, but you mine persuade me otherwise!! from beginning to end...excellent! best oneshot ever.

As I finished reading this, the only thing that came to mind was, 'WOW!'

Powerful piece. Excellent job. Showing that Inu killed not only his mate but also his unborn child was the final kicker.

Thanks for sharing it!

Wowwies. This was haunting and beautiful and poignant all rolled up into one little ficlet. You did a wonderful job.

wow that was the saddest but most touching story i've read in a while (snifful sniff)

Oh my god, almost every single one of your fanfics are so sad, it actually hurts to read it all. Yet, they're all so good. I'm hoping to hear from you a LOT more. Ta Ta

That was good, it was intense, but man it was good! it was a little dark though, anyway, i actually like it.

Excellent. Very well done. Sad, but very believable.

WOW ISNT ENOUGH TO SAY HOW GOOD THIS WAS...

THAT WAS SO WONDERFUL BUT SO SAD I CRYED :( BUT ALL THE SAME YOUR A GREAT WRITER