That's nice and funny.

haha lol thats was really cute

Bravo! I've read three of these and this is the best one so far! Iron tacks... Darn, I almost forgot about all of that.

i like. when she talks it make her sound like she is a human person.

SWEET! I love it, linking both stories like that! Perfection!

Oh, haha. XD; I love this. It's all fluttery and pretty at the beginning, which is really, really cool. And their conversation makes me laugh - I love~ the ending line. Like, just ending it there seems perfect, since Roiben's reaction is a given.

Hee, I love this. ♥

I like this. I read it and tried to review it a couple days ago,but for some reason the site wouldn't let me. A friend and I meant to enter this contest, but we procrastinated too long. I read the entries (I saw yours there, well done!) and decided that I could write as well or better than most of them, and to write my own, even though it was too late. It turned out to be more dark than funny, but I think I might write a funny one, too...

At bit Jumpy, I like the idea.

I didn't know where you were going with it.

So...at which point did Roiben laugh?

hee! yay! much love and chocolate for you! I'm so proud you entered! Keep writing!