Hehe, I'm loving this. I think you're doing a great job with the interactions between the three guys, and I'm completely curious about what made Serenity go running to Joey's place. I have some guesses, but I very much doubt that they're right. I'm really hoping that you'll decide to write more in the near future. I'd certainly love to read it!

woowee! you can write em! cant wait for the next chapter

I think this is pretty good. I'll admit the concept in itself is a bit odd to me, but your writing and handle of characterisation really pulls it through.
This is well crafted, with some cool ideas, a nice tone of humour and yeah, the basic plot is a bit odd... but I do like this.
I look forward to reading the next part.

So, this parring, would for sure not be my normal choice, but I find myself loving your fic, and liking it more and more. I hope you continue fast.

Oh wow. Gotta love this, all the way through! My Joey stopped several places going, "Wait. That's -- SO me!" or "SO Tristan!" or whatever. XD I was just as convinced. You've really got entertaining voices for them and this story's a total treat to read. Bardicsidhe linked me to this and I'm really happy she did - more IR is always a good thing! :D

It works well. I am giggling all the way thru it, Jou is stalking his own sister. Which as far as I can tell is normal behavior for a concerned brother. Slash writer waitress...cackles manically.
And am proud of your slashiness.