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| Tani Barton 2008-03-30 ch 2,  | abuseHehe, I'm loving this. I think you're doing a great job with the interactions between the three guys, and I'm completely curious about what made Serenity go running to Joey's place. I have some guesses, but I very much doubt that they're right. I'm really hoping that you'll decide to write more in the near future. I'd certainly love to read it! |
| G_S 2007-04-09 ch 1, anon. | abusewoowee! you can write em! cant wait for the next chapter |
| Yma 2007-01-11 ch 2, | abuseI think this is pretty good. I'll admit the concept in itself is a bit odd to me, but your writing and handle of characterisation really pulls it through. This is well crafted, with some cool ideas, a nice tone of humour and yeah, the basic plot is a bit odd... but I do like this. I look forward to reading the next part. |
| eowynwildfire 2007-01-08 ch 2, | abuseSo, this parring, would for sure not be my normal choice, but I find myself loving your fic, and liking it more and more. I hope you continue fast. |
| Nightengale 2007-01-07 ch 2, anon. | abuseOh wow. Gotta love this, all the way through! My Joey stopped several places going, "Wait. That's -- SO me!" or "SO Tristan!" or whatever. XD I was just as convinced. You've really got entertaining voices for them and this story's a total treat to read. Bardicsidhe linked me to this and I'm really happy she did - more IR is always a good thing! :D |
| Stardancer1 2007-01-07 ch 2, | abuseIt works well. I am giggling all the way thru it, Jou is stalking his own sister. Which as far as I can tell is normal behavior for a concerned brother. Slash writer waitress...cackles manically. And am proud of your slashiness. |