Beautiful.

Very sweet. I think this is a good representation of how the Unicorn would feel.

I actually saw this movie recently, and its story was breathtakingly wonderful. It was one of the best thought-provoking cartoons of all time, and this story brought all of the sad but best parts of the movie to life. Perfect job, simple but beautiful wording. Great!

The Lady Arianrod.

Beautiful... Longing... True... A Sweet Sadness... The story is wonderful and what, I believe, would be the Unicorn's view of her past. It leaves you with sorrow, and yet, comforts to a soft ache with the knowledge that the love of L'r and Amalthea would always exist.

This has a longing sadness to it. Nice.

That's very good. Kinda sad though..

Oooo... I like it. The quotation marks somehow got garbled when you must've uploaded, but otherwise, it's a very nice little piece. Keep up the good work!

That's SOOO sweet a little sad but super sweet. I really like it!

What a lovely story. And so true to the story as I saw it on the big screen. Beautiful.

Very nice! beautiful actually. I absolutely love that movie (though i have yet to read the book, i'll be quick to pick up a copy of it) but i only recently watched it after an absence from it of many years. keep up the great work.

Wow. This was wonderful. Very worthy of the movie, and the song you put in fits very well. An excellent read.