This was so amazing, I read it in one sitting and I had tears streaming down my face at the end of it. Thank you for a wonderful story!

To say I was suprised to see 11 chapter updates in my email from you today would be an understatement.

Even though I love Faerlain and Victoria (and I wanted them to be together before), I think I'll always love "Safe in my Arms" the most, out of all your creations.

But anyway, Thank you for writing this excellent story! I'm looking forward to reading even more of your stories. :)

Man - I liked the original version of this story and couldn't imagine a re-write. But this was wonderful!

Excellent story. I sincerely enjoyed it. Thanks for making such an amazing story for us to enjoy.

Jousting Elf with a Sabre

Wonderfully done!

Too bad you couldn't update soon!

Can't wait to read more!

Are you cutting it short *sob*

And I forgot all about this story... so I had to go and read it all again... -.-"

Did you, by any chance upload Chapter 11 twice?

Wow! That's quite a lot of stuff to deal with! *claps* Good luck mate! Update as soon as you can! I think this story's gonna be better than the other one... because she's going to end up with Faerlain!

I'm sorry about your grandfather...I understand, both my grandfathers, 2 of my uncles, and my 21 year old cousin are recovering alcoholics. I know how it can ruin people and hurt families...anyway, I'm sure that he will be ok. Trust in that. Oh, I bet your house is busy as everyone is getting ready for that new little bundle of joy :) I'm so happy for you!

As for this chapter, nice work. I wonder who is was that found her...we will find that out, right? And I can't remember where Talorta went, but my instincts tell me that she might've been stolen or she was just "making babies" ;) I have a fuzzy scene in the back of my brain where a horse (might've been Talorta) was stolen by this guy and treated like crap. Victoria finds him eventually, but he's all skinny and unhealthy. But I could be wrong.

Update soon mellonamin!

Namarie,

Katy

The sad part is those assholes probably knew that those boys did what she accused them off. And just because she is a human they think that their' actions are justified.

I am very very very very (etc) thankful! I love little Ana. The only thing is that it's the same name as my cricket coach, who's pretty strict. It's rather odd.

Aw...Ana's so cute! And Victoria delivering a child? Wow...I'd be too scared to do it right! Just wondering, did Mirlaic get there before the baby was born, or did Victoria do it on her own?

Update soon!

Namarie,

Katy

Aha.. the ellipses seem to have disappeared bu this chapter! :) Beautiful ending, it would certainly help if she could get some other Elven friends.

awesome chapter, keep up the good work and update soon please,

danke

laterz laurs

A bit of an overuse of ellipses and I think it should be 'per se' here: "fogged up, not groggy per say".

But the plot and the way you write it flows well, I was worried at the start it would be a bit melodramatic or cliched but you've steered it well away from that.

Wow...chapters 6 and 7 were FULL of EMOTION! Geez...you got Victoria going from nervous to blissfull to insecure to angry to heartbroken to confused to dismayed to joyful. I would be a GIANT mess after all of that emotional turmoil, let me tell you. I hope that Faerlain is just as taken with Victoria as she is with him, but I wouldn't mind if it took some time for him to feel that way. Don't get me wrong, I LOVE the Victoria/Faerlain pairing (you know I'm the biggest fan), but I think it would feel more real to me if it took him longer to feel the same way, rather than having him fall for her so soon. Like Victoria said, its only been 3 months, and that's still kinda short for a human to fall in love, but for an elf, 3 months is like 3 days, you know? Perhaps you could write a chapter that just focused on Faerlain's thoughts. I know this is from Victoria's POV, for the most part, but I've always wanted to get into his head. By seeing the conflict that must be in there, he could come to the conclusion that falling in love with her would bring more trouble than good, and for a time, that would convince him to be JUST friends. As we already know, Victoria understands the whole mortal/immortal problem, so if Faerlain used that as one of his reasons for just friendship (along with telling her that he didn't love her like that, at least not yet), she would accept it, or try to for a while. Eventually Faerlain would realize that he just can't stop thinking about and spending time with Victoria, and another chapter later could explain his feelings at that time, which would lead him to make the conclusion that he really does love her very much. By then, Victoria may have put up a mask that sort-of convinces her that she doesn't love him, but the dam breaks loose once Faerlain confronts her about his feelings, and then happily ever after! Yay! The passage of a good chunk of time makes things more believable.

Oh, and I'd also like to see a little more action/adventure, if at all possible, considering one of the genres is action/adventure. Knowing the previous story's plot, I know it will be coming, but it would be nice to see a few things thrown in there to keep readers on their toes. This whole Victoria crisis is throwing a good chunk of drama in there, which keeps me on edge, but that can only last so long and give so much. A couple of random mishaps, mysteries, war battles, etc will liven up the story a bit.

I hope I don't sound too nit-picky, because that is not my intent. I would love this story no matter what because I love the characters so much. Whether or not you use my suggestions does not factor in on whether or not I read it. I LOVE it! I just want to suck in as many readers for you as possible. Friends help each other out, you know?

Anyway, I love the quick 2 chapter update, it really just made my evening! Thanks you!

As always, continue to update soon! (lol, does that make sense?)

Namarie,

KT