this story is fantastic! love the character's and everything!

wonderful love it! pet sematary was such a sad movie and book i love what jud's voice says near the end of the film 'A man grows what he can and tends to it because what you by is what you own...and what you own always comes back to you' chilling...

The quote goes..."the soil of a man's heart is stonier, a man grows what he can and he tends it"

This is my recollection of the sentence you plagiarize, and I haven't read this book in nearly twenty years. My memory is better than yours. Plagiarize better next time.

Okay, so in general, the story was, as others said, pretty good. I really like your choice in what happens, but... Have you ever thought of making a role-playing website? Try proboards or freewebs. They're both free, and can help you get better with writing. 3

This could be interesting but I won't be reading beyond chapter 2 for a few reasons. You need to pick a tense, and STAY IN IT. You can't be hopping from present to past with no explanation and certinaly you shouldn't do it in the same paragraph, for example:

"It took me about five days to unpack my things. A month later, I am about to start school, and my life has become dull. I am going to start school tomorrow. Josh had an easy..."

You need to be either talking about what's happening now, as it happens to you, or talking about what happened to you in the past. For example:

"It took me about five days to unpack my things when we first arrived. Josh had an easy...

"My life has become dull since the interest of the move. I'm used to the new house now, and the vacant one across the highway. It's strange over there, you'd think they'd raze it to the ground and start over, but they haven't. Huh.

Every now and then I catch sight of the little dirt path behind our house, and wonder where it leads. Perhaps soon I'll be curious enough to actually follow it... I'm starting school tomorrow. I wonder who, or what, it will bring my way..."

Also your writing is a little disjointed for me, it doesn't "flow" very well but that's just me. Good luck and carry on writing, after all practice makes perfect, or so they tell me! :o)

The End. Great story by the way, are you going to make another sequel?

Sorry, forgot to read this chapter, you're a great writer.

Woah! This story is getting more interesting every chapter! Write more soon!

Oh no! Selene's mother is dead! Can't wait to read on, so I will know!

So the dreams continue. There is no escape from, THE PET SEMETARY! Sorry, I had to say that :)

Wow, awesome chapter, write more and soon!

Great chapter, this is so far an awesome story, you write as well as Stephen King, but not as long chapters, but that is alright. Great Story!

Interesting, I watched Pet Semetary last night and am going to watch Pet Semetary 2 tonight. Graet Story still!

Great story so far! Can't wait to see what happens.

This story is pretty cool! I really liked "The Accident" I would really like to know how she would get over a shovck like that