Such a dreamy oneshot. I love it. Really, my only nitpick is that you kept spelling "exorcise" as "exercise," which was a bit distracting. Overall, a very enjoyable read.

I think I need a tissue now...
*sniffle*
Poor Beej.
So lovesick and smitten he doesn't even see it until it slaps him square in the face.

This was just...WOW...I mean WOW!! I loved this so much! It was incredibly well written and the way you wrote the dialogue and the descriptions just made everything so believably real...you have an absolutely awesome voice, I can't wait to read more of your work!

This was great. Truly an awesome story whichever way you look at it. It was dark, and truly twisted in some parts, which only added to this story's depth. While Beetlejuice was a bit OOC for my liking, this was nonetheless a wonderful story. Awesome job.

heart.erratic

I fucking love this! This story is awesome and well written and just perfect! I could see everything play out just as it was being read, and it's so good! Perfect story!

aww,, now you make me want to go and watch that movie again... I just might have to! Awesome job - I loved it when you would do the little (stuff in parantheses) and then a -- and then continue with the original paragraph. :) nice job.

Amazing, lovely and dark. It was just beautiful! I loved it, you're amazing!

This story is simply amazing. You've captured and portrayed the characters beautifully. You, good woman, are a God among insects. A wolf among sheep. Bravo.

That was really good...

This was amazing! You write so well and this was very interesting to read.

If he could surf, he could have ridden her aura clear to heaven. . .

...Possibly the greatest pick-up line EVER. xD

~VM

M...dark and sexy and sweet and completely wonderful. Very well written, and even if you say it doesn't have a timeline, it flowed quite well. Excellent job.

Wow. That was eerie, sweet, and a wonderful read. I love your portrayal of both Lyds and Beej. Present tense narrative is awesome and perfect for this piece. Great job!

That was beatiful. Maybe the subject wasn't right, but it was undeniably lovely. I am so tired, but i just had to finish it. Thank you!
*Head falls down on keyboard, starts snoring*

AWW! that was so sad...but so good at the end! this was amazing! wow!