 Tonnocal 7/8/09 . chapter 1man...cool. would love to see the 19 years later on this with James Tiberius Burke... |
 evercharmer 4/10/09 . chapter 1This is one of those plot ideas that has to be written just right, especially when it involves having Kirk pregnant for any amount of time.
I find myself not only pleased with how you've written it, but I also can't wait for the next chapter. |
 Kelly Holden 5/11/03 . chapter 1 This is an interesting story, but given it was published in June '01, one wonders if you intend to write more Jane Kirk stories at all. |
 evil rubber ducky 11/11/01 . chapter 1 ok, i've read this darn thing a thousand times and i STILL don't see a freaking sequel! pick up the pace, this story's been here for what seems like years and yet you haven't made a god-darn freaking sequel! *looks around wide-eyed* oh, eh heh heh, well the point is i like this story and i'm sure everyone else does too but could you pleeeeeeeeease hurry it up? thanks so much babe, ducky out |
 GSYH 9/9/01 . chapter 1Right, gender DOES change a lot of things... |
 Grey Bard 8/26/01 . chapter 1Depressing, but pretty darn cool. Nice idea of an ideal world alternative to abortion and why even it isn't that ideal.
I'd really like a sequel, if only to see Jane in action and meet T'Spock |
 StarKitty 8/24/01 . chapter 1Great start! I can't wait to see more :) |
 Oi 7/3/01 . chapter 1Ooooo. What a fascinating premise. Was she denied captaincy because she was a woman? I'm looking forward to seeing this continue. |