This is the most beautiful and eloquently written Howl story I have ever read on this site. Please finish.

awesome i love this fic

condusing musch but hey g r8 fic thanks for it

Well, i gave you a second chance, thought maybe you might have sorted yourself out by the second chapter but it's even worse so to hell with it. Sort out your spelling and grammer or don't publish anything, simple as that.

I will however say, in relevence to the other reviews on here, though i can see why they are angry (i spend hours editing to be curious to the reader) you have a perfect rigth to call a boy a witch, there is nothing against it and it's just commonly now thought to be a girl but men have been called witches in the past. Or else for those who consider it incorrect read Diana Wynne Jones' 'Witch Week' from her Crestomanci series, (for those who don't know, Diana Wynne Jones is the writer of the actual BOOK of 'Howl's Moving Castle'- which is also an excellent and highly reccomended book that in my opinion far exceeds the film).

I'm sorry but this made no sense what so ever. I had to read it allowed to puzzle it out. You haven't edited it at all have you? Which i'm sorry, but it's pathetic, i've ahd to say this to people nicely too many timesso i'm sorry but it's atrocious, no effort has gone in whatsoever. If you re-read the rules of this site you will see that you are obliged to not post anything riddilled with so many mistakes.

Where is spelt 'where' not 'were'

Sophie is spelt as you can see with a capital letter and an 'h' not as you said 'sopie'

No go back and sort out all the other mistkes too or this is just irrisponsable.

A WITCH IS A GIRL AND RAVEN IS NOT, HE'S A WIZARD; YOUR SELLING SUCKS AND SO DOES YOU PUNCTUATION; THERE'S TOO MUCH SWEARING AND THERE'S NO BACKGROUND INFO, SO HOW ARE WE SUPPOSED TO KNOW WHO RAVEN AND MORGANA REALLY ARE AND HOW THEY CAME TO BE TOGETHER?

Uhm... How can I say this.. You need a little more description.. It was mostly all spoken.. You need captials, commas, and puncuations, and periods in some places.. And why did you call the Raven boy a Witch? Witch is the female form of Wizard.. Ek. O_O;'