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| seaweedbrain16101 2008-08-29 ch 1,  | abusethat was kool but i cant wait till the next chapter plzz hurry to put it up |
| Youthful_Flower_4eva 2008-06-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my gosh. I love this, PLZE UPDATE! This is torture waiting!TT_TT. I so hated the ending in the book, It got me all depressed. N E way, this such a great start! It shows real emotion of how Jesse felt when the cruel day came that he found his one love unforgivingly ripped away from his world.BTW U have got to CONTINUE!. If you dont, ill die, and you will be held responsible. Well C ya ^^ |
| Book Mad TJ 2008-05-21 ch 1, | abusePLease update this... |
| Future Mrs.E.Cullen 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abusethis is a brilliant first chapter can you please update soon ? PRETTY-PLEASE-WITH-A-CHERRY-ON-TOP ! |
| Trisana Tenebrae 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseamazing please write more! |
| BellaCullen3554 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseUPDATE? |
| Undisturbed Dreams 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abusethank you so much for rewritting the ending! i hated it so much, it was so sad! |
| Bookworm2049 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abusePlease update! |
| haunted.by.you 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abusewot the others said... update pls! lol |
| dddynamite 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseI love it please write more soon! |
| Secretly Laughing 2007-06-02 ch 1, | abuseDo continue; this is fascinating. |
| Adalene Dubois 2007-05-16 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease update! You can't stop now! |
| MaskedNicci 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseHm... a little short, don't you think? Anyways, I see you have 6 'PLZ update!' reviews, and I'm not really qualified to give those out...oh well! You have done a beautiful job with most of the basic problems. Grammar is good, spelling is good, details are fluent and fitting. A few akward sentences, though. 'it making it'. Did you mean for it to be, '...with the iron fence surrounding it, making it look like a jail.'? Because that would have fit more. I can't actually offer much CC, though, because you've done such a splendid job! I do hope you update soon, because your fans are already growing impatient! |
| BrdomIsTheDvl 2007-01-30 ch 1, | abusePLEASE CONTINUE SOON! |
| S2AmethystSwirlS2 2007-01-24 ch 1, | abuseoh wow! plz update soon! i can't wait to see the next chap. i love it when the author twists the ending up! lol. so plz update so me and the other ppl waiting for ur story will be happy, and in return, we will make u happy with our reviews k? so we give u reviews and u give us a new chap., that sounds like a nice deal doesn't it? so plz update! |