Lovely fic! And for such a great movie too. I always thought Nelson's best moments were the ones where he softened just a little and this is a great take on that side of his character. Well done.

Awww, so adorably cute.

...Aw...that is so incredibly adorable. Dave being all big-hearted and gushy, rescuing the little darling. And just...a puppy? AW. Love the secret little hint-hint-wink-wink of some appetizing slashness. XDD Adorable work, friend!

Tawny

I think this is awrsome

U should really write more

This is awesome, and incredibly cute. And yes, just a little slashy - you do a good job of catching the connection/tension between them that the movie hints at. :)

(Do you have any more Dave/Nelson? I would love to read it, I like how you write them.)

Aw, too cute .

I loved it! Great fic :D