uno im gonna have nightmares thnk to u rite?:O

:D i think these stories r better then the ones tht i read 2 months ago!and those were rlly crazy :D blood was on every singlepage :D

great story

HELLO SHE IS THE MINDREADER OF COURSE KOK COULDNT READ HER MIND YOU ARE SO DUMB SRRY

ai... you'll lots of seguels in future and even though it wasn't a very good erm.. desricbing story I wouldn't want to read a chapter describing none stop and getting nowhere in the story I'll give ya 9/10 it was nice but not much lovey dovey there if it were suppose to be one!
Yet I love the humour you were under control with your story and you did your best be proud!

hey! confusing story but it was GREAT! i laughed a lot specially with Natsume's reactions hehe. tnx fr uploading it!

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bonjour...! this is really great! i really loved this story! i can't wait for the sequel...! and what will happen to natsume...? hehehe...anyway, i think it's better if your sequel will be entitled "travel to the other land" because it's simple yet it has it's own meaning that's very easy to understand...! thanks!

What just happened?
waah! MiKAN!

hehe. luv thios fic!; )

OMG I LOVE IT!! SO MUCH ACTION!!

Plz~ UPDATE! And, I don't really get it... the story made me twist so much... anyways, tks 4 the update, plz try hard to update sooner! (cause everyone's waiting 4 u )

please continue! i wanna see more of what's going to happen next! hehe... and i think that it's better that hotaru and others know what really happens that mikan doesnt tell them... please continue! thanks!=D

I love it,..!! and thanks for your reviews,..
hehe,..(sorry for the late review,..)

Nice! thnx for the update...

um... i dont get it... i dont really understand the story at all... sorry... (^_^) but i didn't say it was bad, just explain it in a more... hmm... in a simple way... :)