Oh dear, what a sad situation!

Please updats soon!

Wow! What a cliffhanger! Very, very exciting! And
Hugs,

Sarah x

This story is SO well written! You have really managed to capture the culture of Rohan at this period. And the events and polotics etc.

another good chapter, the suspence is killing me. i'm sorry that i cant think of any constructive critism.

I really love this story, and hope you continue with it. I particularly like Grima's character, and Theoden's. Will we be seeing more of Driana? I hope so.

I really liked Theodred's interaction with Eowyn in the beginning. It explains a lot!

Can't wait for an update!

Kuramagal

A good chapter. I really liked it! There are a few grammatical mistakes in this chapter. For example:

“Don’t speak of my cousin in that tone.” Èowyn said bitterly and looked away. “I’m sorry, my lady. I don’t wish to be rude. It’s sad, it is…that the Prince is in such a state.”

The way this should be worded is this:

“Don’t speak of my cousin in that tone.” Èowyn said bitterly and looked away.
“I’m sorry, my lady. I don’t wish to be rude. It’s sad, it is…that the Prince is in such a state.”

You needed a new paragraph each time someone speaks. Other than this it was a great chapter! Poor Theodred, I really like him. I wish he hadn't died!

Kuramagal

I'm quite surprised no one has reviewed for this. I thought it was very good. A couple of times your tenses changed, but other than that I really thought it was well written.

I've always liked Theodred. I'm surprised his not as famous as Legolas or Erestor are on this site. After all, the actor who played him, of what we could see of him, was very pretty! ;)

Anyway, great job. Post again soon!

Kuramagal