Well, that was a new twist! If Aro touches her, will she gain all his power (obtained over the last two thousand years)? Since Aro is so evil, that could really ruin her for a while, couldn't it?

Very cute chapter- interesting plot!

I love your story!You are an amazing writer!

oh...never mind, they were just defeated.

but then why were they "gone?"

I don't get how the Volturi died - you never wrote about that.

I really loved the story!

Wow, this chapter was really really well-written! Better than Breaking Dawn's version, actually. :)

I think you need to work on your dialogue a little, and there are spaces missing between a few of the words.

But descriptive writing seems to be your strength. I loved how it was descriptive and you had a lot of insight into a condition that nobody's ever really experienced. Your writing really seemed to carry the essence of that pain Bella must have felt-things like:

Every breath brought the feeling of inhaling pure flame. Every movement brought searing torture. There was no way to keep my body from writhing, and there was no stopping the suffering.

And the whole thing where you describe each organ solidiying and nerves cauterising themselves and blistering skin... you have a wonderful imagination.

I know, I know, I'm raving about pain, which sounds odd, but my point is, this was very well done!

loved it!

loved it !

Love this story, Thanks for sharing x x x

good story i am going to read the sequels

This story was really good! I love how everyone in Volterra was afraid of her and she became a legend!

Great story! Bella's power is awesome as well as her brilliance in her planned out attack on the Volturi.

Although this is "late" compared to the publishing date, I completely plan to go straight from review to read the sequel!

I normally dont review stories because I normally don't have the time, but I have got to say Chapter 7 of Bella's Cross was AWESOME! I absolutely love it. I KNOW im gonna follow you and read every story you write about twilight because this one chapter moved me. it was amazing the rogue-like power you gave bella and the fact that it amplifies itself. i just think its amazing. Thanks for writing and make sure you comtimue to do so. 3 u

interesting start. gonna go start the sequeel now

hey! i really adore this story, its so good!

i would say good luck with your next two but you have already writen them, so good luck with the forth, if you do end up writing one, which would be great. if this doesnt make sense, i have already read you other stories, bella's crown, and bella's war! and they make an outragously wicked saga!

love phoebe!