your right almost every time he have a date he always think about akane and he is a idiot

I think I read this one before, the funny thing is that you're one of the few authors that actually write more than one genre; and the incredible part is that you are good in all the genres you have wrote stories for so far! Good fic!

Anna a anime version of Akari? You had Ryouga divorcing to Akari only to have him marry another woman like Akari? Isn't that a little weird? I think that Ukyou should have been the one who married Ryouga, he could have accidentally visited her shop and...But hey, you're the writer do whatever you want. Good story though, I liked it alot considering somethings. At least Ryouga and Akari didn't end up together! More please!

Very nicely written! But you might want to run future stories past some friends so they can edit the little grammar mistakes here and there. But I like the concept! Shows that Akari might not be the right one for Ryouga, vice versa, and what could've happened!

I don't really hate Akari.. I'm one of the few that actually respect the gal, so when I read this.. I felt soo bad for her! Few errors here and there, but I liked the story anyway. An extra half-eaten-cookie to you for including Anna! Keep up the great work!

A very good fic, I like what you did for them and showed that maybe they wouldn't have a fairy tale marriage.

The story's nice, but you really need to work on the grammar. Like “When did my life started to shine again?” or "Ryoga was stunned, do all those things existed?" Get a pre-reader or two, that should help a lot.