It's short, but it get's the point across really strong. No messy dialogue or unecessary description to muddle the strong atmosphere created. Really well done. :)

short n sweet. nice

Wow ThIs fiC iS wOndErfUl I LikE it sOO faR

Man that is sad, I feel for those two. Good work.

wow. nice writing. good descriptions. pure awesomeness altogether.

*adds to fave*

aw...that was sad yet beutifully written at the same time.
Yer story just had to call for another chapter or sumthing when they can see each other again (and all those feelings can rise)..haha i just love those two together..

short and sweet. ^-^ i dont usually read oneshots but this one was worth my time. 'til then.