This fic is maybe even better than the original - one of only a few sequels I think that about. I think your "Wallace" voice is impeccable - but I wish that you'd let Eames have her proposal.

Another brilliant fic, you're a genius!

I can't WAIT until you finish the next installment in this series. Definitely keep writing because your a great story teller. It's amazing how you could keep the suspense going throughout the chapter! Great job!

Hi, I finished reading your fics yesterday night, which is why I didn't review till now.

I just love it. I have no other words for it. It's an excellent Goren/Eames love story that not only keeps the two leads in character, but makes sure that the romance doesn't overshadow their jobs or anything else that happens down in Major Case.

I especially liked this fic because of Nicole. It's just the kind of twisted thing she'd do to Bobby, and I've always thought that on some psychotic level, she loves him because he's not like any other guy she's met. For her to end like she did is even more fitting.

Hoping you write a sequel! Can't wait to meet Alex or Roberta or Bambi McBimbo, whatever s/he is called ;)

~ Aislinn

Hm, you said you read Stephen King...are you a Dark Tower fan? Because I'm totally seeing shades of Eddie and Henry in this Ainsley/not-Mia pair...

Absorbed in the story, if you couldn't tell...must finish now!

A plus! What a great story! And I think the ending is just perfect!

Awe, she left her the sona-gram to cuddle up with. LOL. Got her ass. Way to go. That was perfect.

I was hoping it would go this way. I love this story.

That was just beautiful. I love love love it!

I want you to write the wedding. bring on the cheese.

Oh god. I'm going to need a cold shower. And there's still more.

LOL. You cut from beginning to afterglow? Never. And I'd whine if you did. You ever thought that perhaps working together we might turn a profit in smutty romance novels?

Her sister is going to kick her ass. LOL. Wonderful chapter.

Man oh man, you're killing me here. Glad the next chapter is there waiting for me.

I love this story. You know I love this story. I swear the ending of this chapter nearly gave me a heart attack the first time I read it. Sorry I have been away on my own crap so much these days.