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| chocochip and stikbuble 2008-04-10 ch 1,  | abuseThis is an excellent story. I love Pern and you had a brilliant idea. Kudos to you! (though I can't think Menolly could have Impressed. Jaxom and Ruth belonged together) |
| XxXbrokenXxXreflectionsXxX 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abusewow this was amazing. i loved the alternate ending. |
| doom1956 2007-02-02 ch 1, | abuseBravo!! Very good. I like your style. Your not Todd's sister are you? If so maybe Anne should of colaborated with you. LOL Please keep this story going, would love to read more about Menolly's and Ruath's adventures. I have added you to my aurhors list. |
| jeanette russell 2007-01-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseSign! what a sad AU. Jaxom never impressed Ruth. Menolly never got to go to Harper Hall. It works but it wasn't perfect. |
| Shadowdancer9 2007-01-20 ch 1, | abusethis is really well done. you should consider taking it further and exploring how it may have changed some of the cannon events. I hope you will consider doing that. you have a very good style of writing; it flows well without wasted words or the stiltedness some writers have. I would love to see how you would take some of the events now; I was excited about the possibility until I backtracked out of the story. i was very disappointed seeing the "complete" word on the titles page. Please do consider writing further in this AU you have created. WELL DONE! I am going to put you on my author and story alert in the hopes you will continue the storyline! |
| Renegade Elementalist 2007-01-09 ch 1, | abuseIf you remember back to the books, there's a convo between N'ton and Jaxom about Ruth, hinting that he carries all colors rather than none...could it be that whites have no gender on their own and take after their rider? I know at least one fanweyr that's gone down that path, given Ruth's lack of interest in mating flights and the comment about being able to see shadings of brown and gold and blue in his hide when the sun caught it correctly. Really well written and well thought out IMO. |
| truegold-dragonstar 2007-01-09 ch 1, | abuseThis story is really well written and thought out. I like it! But one thing really did confuse me - Ruth/Ruath's name and gender. Surely those things would be the same whoever broke the egg and Impressed? I'll be interested to find out where this is going. Good luck! t-d |
| astrokath 2007-01-09 ch 1, | abuseGood to see you're posting these here as well - I really do like what you did with this one. And the best thing about old stories like this is that they're thoroughly proof-read, with not an error in sight. Oh - you may want to accept anonymous reviews as well. You'll get more that way. |