 Freebird87 2007-08-13 . chapter 8So where do George and Lorraine live in the improved 2015? |
 Freebird87 2007-07-10 . chapter 3I thought Marty Jr. and Marlene were twins. Even though Marlene is really MJF in a wig, she actually didn't look so masculine. Is Norman Jennifer's grandfather's name in your stories too? |
 TPolTucker 2007-01-19 . chapter 10wow, I love your stories. I can't wait to see a new one. |
 Macri007 2007-01-14 . chapter 6cool man |
 elfox15 2007-01-14 . chapter 5It's a very good story so far! I like it a lot! |
 Macri007 2007-01-14 . chapter 5Kind of Nice,
I am Justin and i think Marty Jr needs to go in to training before he can learn to defend him self. why not play the "Eye Of The Tider" theme from Rocky. And readers can read the lyrics of the song as marty Trains.
Justin |
 TPolTucker 2007-01-12 . chapter 4And the story had to end so short. I can't wait to see more |
 Macri007 2007-01-09 . chapter 3nice please tell more |