I absolutely love this story and as I was reading it, I was listening to a sad song called "Missing You" by John Waite and I came so close to crying because the song and the lyrics fit the scene and the mood of this fanfic quite well, and because I felt so horrible for Ino. =[.

CatGirl*

A really beautiful fic. While reading, I could almost see Ino sitting there in the snow, staring at the sky, and feel her desperation.
You're a friggin' talent.

This was a sad but good. And Chouji seemed a little bit OOC. It is still all good thought 5/5.

Lovely.

this is really good...hope your other fanfics are as good as this one is.

Okay as you can probably tell, I hardly ever venture outside the KakaIru/IruKaka fandom...but I like your writing, and the summary sounded appealing. This is such a well written and poignant fic :]

please admit that your favorite hobbt is making people nearly cry in front of a computer screen ;_; that's pure genius O.o

You are so good. I've always been a steadfast Temari / Shika fan but I think I have been converted . . . or at least willing to share!

This is so heartbreaking.
It's very well-written and amazing.
Great work!

Aw *sniffle*!

Its very nicely written with your usual style (which I like very much :), but I feel that Chouji came out a bit OOC... Like being quick to anger. I'd imagine him being sulkier and more introverted or something...

And I really liked the last paragraph :) Hope this helps. Well done!
-Ali-