 desert anbu 6/6/02 . chapter 1Ewww...sorry, couldn't help it. Doesn't Ken end up marrying that girl with the helmet and big glasses? Sorry, TK's one of my favorite characters and it's weird reading something like this. Very well written though. A few gramatical and spelling mistakes, but otherwise, very good. His frustration was showed clearly, and it's understandable the way he reacted to his brother. Is there going to be another chapter?
- Dracon ;) |