OH MY GODS!
TISSUE WARNING!
This was so well written. I am here crying in my room at 3am. You wrote this beautifully

That actually made me emotional and so very sad. It really moved me how you wrote them. Truly an awesome work of fanfiction!

Fascinating. It's an interesting idea and I think you handled it well.

wow...so dark yet so beautiful...great fic...though im more of a MM/AD shipper than MM/TR but i do like the posiblility of it being there...great job!

This is a truly brilliant piece of work. I can find no fault with the use of language (though there were a few grammatical errors, but very few) and the emotions portrayed were so realistic it was quite uncanny.
Congrats on a wonderful story that will definitely stay with me
Minniequill