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astrofaces
2009-07-17 . chapter 1
your style is indeed erotic, very nice narrative!
quiltingdiva
2009-07-03 . chapter 25
Love your story. It has happily interrupted my life the past three days!
Your observations on Alzheimers hit very close to home. I know from experience that Clark
will have his hands full.
Thank you for adding the quilt.
You have a gift. Thanks for sharing it with us. Can't wait for the next go round!
htbthomas
2009-05-19 . chapter 25
I think this is the first time I really connected the storyline with things that are happening in your own life. Now I feel silly. But I really like that you've been able to work in many of the issues here. :)

And it is definitely a bit of a cliffie... is she remembering now? I hope so. :)
Stelmaria
2009-05-17 . chapter 25
I bet lots of people have been anxiously awaiting your update, and it does not disappoint. Thanks! What a cliffy.
Kala Lane-Kent
2009-05-16 . chapter 25
I just want to hug your Clark. My God, how much more can happen to him? Your personal experience shines through on several occasions in this chapter and it makes it all the more heart-rending. And the moment at the hospital between Lois and Clark was wonderful. I think you did a lovely job of showing how off-center Lois' memory loss is making him.

So glad you updated!
SongoftheDarquePhoenix
2009-05-15 . chapter 25
Now thasts just mean..!
jason kent
2009-05-15 . chapter 25
Continues! This is a good story, definitely continue it.
Jason
mistressbabette51
2009-05-15 . chapter 25
Yayy, thanks for coming back Kara-El, and updating one of my all-time favorites.

Oh, my poor Martha, Ben, and her entire family. How very, very sad. Please, God, please let’s find a cure for this horrible disease.

I hope Lois will be alright now. It definitely sounds that way.

Thanks again for updating.
supesfan18
2009-05-15 . chapter 25
nice chapter, liked the description. hope more chapters come faster...we havent forgotten the story, just dont forget us well lol
remey74
2009-03-14 . chapter 24
wow do you think you will ever add more to this great story?i truly hope so i need to know what happens
htbthomas
2009-01-12 . chapter 24
Sorry it took me so long to get to this review! This chapter is very surreal... I think I might have been as confused as Kal is. God/Jor-El and free will and Ben... I wonder what all of it means? :)
Severus-is-my-man5690
2009-01-06 . chapter 24
OMG!! LOVE IT! IM SO GLAD U DID THIS!
Severus-is-my-man5690
2009-01-05 . chapter 12
LOL!
ReadingRed
2008-12-30 . chapter 24
I love the update, can't wait for the next one.
Bellarata
2008-12-30 . chapter 24
ok, I think I understand... Maybe. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
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