A great story. Very good.

i personally think it should have a sequel. Or you could write a bigger story similar to this one. I have read "burn beautiful" and loved it also. So I really believe you could write a great spuffy romance. But it is also a very well written one-shoot. So good job!

From a new fan

SEQUEL!

you don't have to make this a huge story, but i would love to see a sequel to it. at least maybe another oneshot or something of them actually talking and maybe deciding to go out. it was a really cute story and a lot could be done with it, but if not, this is a good place to stop. if you ever do decide on a sequel, i will definitely read it. loved the story!